Sunday, October 30, 2022

Short Story: Help

Here's a short story I wrote in the spirit of Halloween. It was originally done for my Creative Skills Development class. The idea was to take something typically considered innocent and turn it into the evil main character of a scary story. Constructive criticism is welcomed! The story is behind the cut...





Help

“Could you help me, please? Excuse me? Could you help me? Please.”
Sasha looked around and finally saw the little girl standing on the porch steps.
That’s odd, she thought. I didn’t think anyone lived here. I guess someone finally bought the old place.
“Excuse me,” the little girl said once more, coming down the steps towards Sasha. “Please, I need help.”
“What’s wrong, sweetie?” Sasha replied, stamping her feet and rubbing her hands together to keep warm in the chill autumn air. She should have worn her heavier jacket. There was no time to go back and get it. She was already late and now this little girl was making her later. Ah, well, there are other jobs, she thought.
“It’s my father,” the little girl said. “He’s fallen and I can’t wake him up. Please, come and help him.” The little girl turned and moved quickly back up the porch steps.
Sasha started to follow when she remembered her cell phone. “Did you call 911,” she asked. “You should call 911 before you do anything else when someone is badly hurt, you know.”
The little girl stopped near the top of the steps and replied “The telephone isn’t connected.”
Sasha pulled out her cell phone and started to dial saying, “That’s ok. I’ve got my cell. I’ll dial 911…” Before she was able to finish the sentence the little girl bolted down the stairs, grabbed her free hand, and tried to pull her up the stairs. The cell phone flew out of Sasha’s hand and onto the sidewalk. She moved to retrieve it but the little girl wouldn’t let go.
“Please, there is no time. He’s badly hurt. You must help him,” the little girl cried. Sasha could see how frantic she was. She decided it wouldn’t hurt to check on her father first and then come back to get the cell phone to call 911. She doubted anyone would steal it even though it was lying in plain sight on the sidewalk; the neighborhood was practically abandoned.
Sasha let the little girl pull her up the porch steps and into the foyer. It was dark inside. There were heavy velvet curtains covering the windows and no lights had been turned on. She noticed a switch on the wall near the front door and pushed it. Nothing happened. “No electricity,” she asked the little girl.
“Yes, but the fuse blew. Father was going down to change it when he fell,” she replied. The little girl picked up a candle stub from the foyer table, lit it, and motioned for Sasha to follow her. They moved quickly into the gloom, the candle providing the only light.
The little girl stopped at a nondescript door outside what looked to be the kitchen. She pulled a key from her pocket and unlocked it. “Father is down there. In the cellar,” she explained.
Suddenly, Sasha did not want the little girl to open the door. She did not want to see what was on the other side. Stop being silly, she told herself. There’s nothing on the other side of the door except some stairs, the cellar, and an injured man. She gathered her courage and reached for the doorknob, opened the door, and let loose a giggle when nothing gruesome jumped out at her.
Sasha moved to the top of the stairs and peered into the darkness below. She could see nothing, not even the little girl’s father. She turned to the little girl and asked “Do you have a flashlight I could use? I can’t see anything down there.”
The little girl replied “Father had the only flashlight with him when he fell. I think I remember seeing it by him on the floor. This is the only candle I have, sorry; I don’t want to be left in the dark.”
“What exactly happened to your father? You never said.”
The little girl looked worried. “He fell down the stairs. We were in the kitchen when the fuse blew. Father got angry and, I guess, he wasn’t watching where he was going. He must have missed a step and fell. He’s at the bottom of the stairs. He wasn’t moving and I couldn’t get him to wake up.”
“And you’re sure you saw the flashlight next to him?” Sasha was hesitant. She really did not want to go down the stairs in the dark. Something wasn’t right but she couldn’t put her finger on what.
“Yes, it was next to him. On the floor. You shouldn’t have any problem finding it. Please, check on him. Make sure he’s ok. I couldn’t get him to wake up,” the little girl sobbed. “Please!”
Sasha turned to go down the stairs. As she pivoted to navigate the first step she felt a hard shove from behind. The shove was so strong that she lost her footing and fell to the floor below; striking her head hard. The last thing she heard before she lost consciousness was the door being closed and locked. The last thing she saw was that there was no one lying at the bottom of the stairs except her.
In the hallway the little girl removed the key from the lock and put it back in her pocket. A small, wicked smile played across her lips. She should keep them occupied and well-fed for a while, she thought.


Photo Reference:
Feltner, S. A. (Photographer). (1910-1925). Photo yc 6-45a girl standing on porch steps. [Web Photo]. Retrieved from http://www.tngenweb.org/stewart/fpa/fpayoungchildren.htm

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